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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The technological leap in
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recent years is simply astonishing. A segment of the society opines that the evolution of science has
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dominance over humans.
However
, another group of
believe
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technology
 has a beneficial impact on the general population.
This
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technology
 over the public. The
modern day
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 equipment with artificial
inteligence
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intelligence
 is beyond one's imagination.
Furthermore
, computers and
moblie
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mobile
 phones
use
 has become a part of our lives and it offers
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ariety of advantages, especially during
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 ongoing pandemic.
For instance
, in Sri Lanka teachers were able to conduct
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ideo conference with their student
via
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 online to teach their pupils and the government was able to contact trace covid patients with the
use
 of
technology
.
Therefore
, the practical
use
 of new devices play an instrumental role in On contrary, to the assistance it provides, there are repercussions following the regular
use
 of smart devices.
In addition
, the younger generation
spend
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significant
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of
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time on phones and front of the television.
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ecent study reveals
todlers
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toddlers
 who are engaged in watching TV and playing games on mobiles tend to impair their cognitive thinking capability to some extent. The consequences of the usage of new
technology
 cannot be ignored mainly among the new generation. In conclusion
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the advancement of
technology
have
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 both quality and unpleasant outcomes. The
use
 of state of the art devices can aid the public, especially in an epidemic.
Also
, it can have a negative impact on the upcoming generation of youth.
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