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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many divergent views exist on the importance of forests. A great number of people, including myself are of the opinion that forests are an integral part of our lives and that deforestation may lead to the end of
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 world. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the rationale for my viewpoint on the matter The primary reason upon which my belief is based that the removal of trees can turn
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 into a desert. It goes without saying that the fertility of our land depended entirely on forests.
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, it protects our
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 from rain, sun, and winds.
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, if
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 phenomenon has occurred, strong winds and direct light from the sun will dry up
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. Unsurprisingly, a 2019 study conducted by a group of researchers at the University of Toronto, Canada found that the destruction of forests is leading the globe to drought because nobody is willing to plant new trees. Not only does
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 activity lead to the drying of our world, but it
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 increases air pollution. It stands to reason that forests have the ability to consume all the polluted particles.
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, industries are releasing more waste and forests instantly absorb them . The lack of forest would give
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 waste to evaporate in the air.
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, air will be poisoned.
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, numerous studies have recently found that trees have dramatically fallen over the
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 fifty years in many countries like Russian, Mongolia, and the US. To sum up, I hold to the opinion that our
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 has its own lungs and
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 forest. By their destruction,
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planet
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 will be diminished from
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 world
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