You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give details about your study plans • What type of accommodation are you looking for. • Suggest how your friend can search a place for you.

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letter finds you in the pink of health. You are being missed by everyone here at home and it has been two years now that you haven’t visited home. I am excited that I am going to meet you soon in Alberta. I have enrolled myself in the same university where you are currently studying. Regarding the course, it is

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MS physics degree program, as I got my confirmation of admission

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week and now I am preparing to depart for Canada

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month as my classes will start after 50 days. As you are already studying at the same university, I would need your help in finding rental space for me. As I will be alone,

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, a one-bedroom apartment will be better for me both economically as well as in terms of its maintenance. Considering various rental apps, you can search for the required accommodation and if you find a better deal, you let me know and I will send you the booking amount for now and

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of the amount I will pay once I arrive there. I hope to see you soon!

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

192 words

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In many countries, the crimes rate amongst underaged people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

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