You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give details about your study plans • What type of accommodation are you looking for. • Suggest how your friend can search a place for you.

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I hope you are

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letter finds you in the pink of health. You are being missed by everyone here at home and it has been two years now that you haven’t visited home. I am excited that I am going to meet you soon in Alberta. I have enrolled myself in the same university where you are currently studying. Regarding the course, it is

one-year

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a one-year

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MS physics degree program, as I got my confirmation of admission

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week and now I am preparing to depart for Canada

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month as my classes will start after 50 days. As you are already studying at the same university, I would need your help in finding rental space for me. As I will be alone,

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, a one-bedroom apartment will be better for me both economically as well as in terms of its maintenance. Considering various rental apps, you can search for the required accommodation and if you find a better deal, you let me know and I will send you the booking amount for now and

rest

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of the amount I will pay once I arrive there. I hope to see you soon!

Musaib ul hassanFri Dec 11 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

192 words

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The Greeting

The computers are widely used in education and some people think that teacher don't play an important role in classroom to what extent do you agree?

People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. what are those problems? should the government encourage people to move to a regional town? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant adult. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are causes and what solutions can be taken?

Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggests?