You want to study in another country in some university. You need an accommodation to stay. Your friend is studying in the same university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give details about your study plans • What type of accommodation are you looking for. • Suggest how your friend can search a place for you.

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I hope you are

this

letter finds you in the pink of health. You are being missed by everyone here at home and it has been two years now that you haven’t visited home. I am excited that I am going to meet you soon in Alberta. I have enrolled myself in the same university where you are currently studying. Regarding the course, it is

one-year

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a one-year

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MS physics degree program, as I got my confirmation of admission

last

week and now I am preparing to depart for Canada

month as my classes will start after 50 days. As you are already studying at the same university, I would need your help in finding rental space for me. As I will be alone,

therefore

, a one-bedroom apartment will be better for me both economically as well as in terms of its maintenance. Considering various rental apps, you can search for the required accommodation and if you find a better deal, you let me know and I will send you the booking amount for now and

rest

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the rest

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of the amount I will pay once I arrive there. I hope to see you soon!

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Some governments provide financial assistance for retired, unemployed and disabled citizens. In other countries, families provide support for these people. Discuss both systems and give your opinion about which one you think is better

Q-In town and cities the large shopping mall should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree?

In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?