IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

In order to study at universities students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all of the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Education
Use synonyms
 plays an important role in one's life. It is a must for a person to get educated by good teachers. Mostly, the best teachers are available in the universities,
that is
Linking Words
 why many students prefer to pursue their dream course there.
However
Linking Words
, it is not affordable for many. As per my opinion, quality
education
Use synonyms
 is required for all. At
this
Linking Words
 stage, many people in
this
Linking Words
 world are educated. Still, there are many unemployed students in society. Out of them, many have a good degree but they find it difficult to answer the questions asked during the interview. As per latest Bloomberg's survey on jobs, it is evident that many CEO's feel that they need people to work for them but they are not getting quality graduates,
as a result
Linking Words
 of
this
Linking Words
 they have to accept some candidates who have scored fewer points than the average points set by the company. Most of the CEO's are ready to pay a high salary to
university
Use synonyms
 graduates as they are smart and has more knowledge than others.
However
Linking Words
, it is not an easy task for a poor student to get a
university
Use synonyms
 seat. They feel that the course fee will double their annual expense and will increase the family's debt. Due to
this
Linking Words
, they prefer to pursue the course of their interest in other colleges.
This
Linking Words
 decreases their quality of
education
Use synonyms
.
For example
Linking Words
, consider a student who scores enough marks to get selected for a
university
Use synonyms
, but if he or she was not able to afford it will join some local college for the sake of obtaining a degree. Ultimately, they will have to dilute their dream of studying in a
university
Use synonyms
 and getting a world-class
education
Use synonyms
.
This
Linking Words
 will hit their career hard. To conclude my argument, based on the above facts, governments should reduce
university
Use synonyms
 fees. There should be a reservation for poor students or they should provide free
education
Use synonyms
 for all.
This
Linking Words
 will increase the total country's productivity as well as the economy.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • tuition fees
  • financial background
  • equal opportunities
  • economic growth
  • educated workforce
  • innovation
  • productivity
  • tax revenues
  • devaluation of degrees
  • financial burden
  • higher taxes
  • essential services
  • perceived value
  • motivation
  • financial stake
What to do next:
Look at other essays: