Write about the following topic: In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and includes relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, people are using their phones for any money transaction
instead
of going physically. While the habit is good for our society, it might be dangerous sometimes. The positive side is always stronger than the other ones. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss the merits and demerits.
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To begin
with, there are definitely plenty of advantages of using some apps, which are becoming more frequent these days. Linking Words
Firstly
, they are convenient to use. Almost everybody in Linking Words
this
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have
cellphones, Change the verb form
has
thus
, it is quite handy and easy if payment could be done from wherever you want. Linking Words
For example
, people could buy anything and pay the bill by phone without giving cash. Linking Words
Secondly
, it is time-saving. Linking Words
In other words
, people are so busy nowadays that sometimes they do not prefer to go physically for payment, Linking Words
hence
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this
could be done in no time from anywhere. Linking Words
Therefore
, it is always a good option to have these systems in mobile phones to make life easy.
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On the other hand
, few disadvantages make it hard for some people. There are chances of fraud in online banking. Hackers are trying various types of new hacking systems to rob money. These apps may not be trustworthy sometimes in order to keep safe the bank details. Linking Words
Consequently
, some people's whole account balance could be lost. A person from Brampton, Linking Words
for instance
, got into a trap and lost his total savings by Linking Words
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nline transaction. Add an article
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an
Also
, sometimes stolen phones could be a threat Linking Words
for
those who use phones for payment. Anybody could steal the details from that cellphone. Verify preposition usage
to
However
, phones these days come with extra security and protection so that any other person than the owner could not handle it. Linking Words
Moreover
, the disadvantages could make it difficult for some people Linking Words
m
ake them reconsider the process.
In conclusion, Add the particle
to
this
essay has discussed both pros and cons. Linking Words
Although
using mobile phones may have advantages and disadvantages, the benefits are more than the other ones.Linking Words
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