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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study as well at the home. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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There is an abundance of
information
 available on the
internet
, for
this
 reason, many argue that children are no longer required to go to
school
, as they may acquire
information
 through the
internet
,
however
, many others, including I strongly disagree with
this
 proposal and affirm that home-based education can not replace schooling. On the one hand, among the merits of
school
-based education is that children can learn not only scientific subjects but
also
 social skills at
school
. Interaction with other children can teach them how to communicate and cooperate.
For instance
, during an ordinary game at
school
, children will learn how they should cooperate with others for being successful.
In addition
, learning at home does not have
the
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 variety of schooling and soon will become
lackluster
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.
Moreover
, the students who study from home do not have the opportunity to find friends, which is one of the most important advantages of going to
school
.
On the other hand
,
although
 some find a few demerits for going to
school
,
such
 as crowdedness of the schools as a distraction for the students, these interruptions will be beneficial because interaction among the students may teach them how to deal with critical situations and
finally
 will lead to the development of soft skills
such
 as leadership and being a team player.
Furthermore
, despite the fact that there is lots of
information
 available through the
internet
, children need help for the discretion of the
information
 as many data on the
internet
 lack authenticity and are not valid.
For example
, children can find various narrations about the history of world war II which may make the student confused. A history teacher may be invaluable in
this
 condition. In summary, I firmly disagree with the idea that the availability of
information
 on the
internet
 has resolved the necessity of going to
school
. I suggest,
however
, children may use
this
 valuable gadget along with their
school
 curriculum to enhance their learning while they use the merits of schooling.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • formal education
  • structured learning environment
  • self-paced learning
  • personalized learning
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • socio-economic disparities
  • qualifiable educators
  • motivation
  • tailored teaching methods
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking
  • routine
  • discipline
  • extracurricular activities
  • holistic development
  • well-rounded education
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