You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

#home #party #noise #neighbour #plans

Dear Sam, I am Amulya,

Change the pronoun

show examples

and my family recently moved into

Aboot

Correct your spelling

About

Landing and I reside

to your apartment unit. As part of our new

move in

Add a hyphen

move-in

show examples

we are hosting

Change the article

show examples

house warming party

this

weekend. Let me give you a brief introduction about myself, I am working as an Integration

engineer

Change the capitalization

Engineer

show examples

at Infi Technologies located in Austin. Recently I got transferred to Boston and my new office location is just a mile away from our apartment. We are organising a

get together

Join the words

get-together

show examples

event coming

saturday

Change the capitalization

Saturday

show examples

evening, there will be

small

Correct article usage

a small

show examples

crowd attending the party. There might be a little sound and inconveniences from our end. I kindly request your cooperation on

this

occasion. I would

also

like to invite you and your family to the house warming ceremony. We will be having some cultural rituals as per our tradition, followed by games and dinner. Thank you

understanding

Change preposition

for understanding

show examples

. Regards, Amulya

Submitted by amulyauu on Sun Jan 03 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

152 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
understanding

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

8
band
Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/her to a party at your home and include the following: what the party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accommodate him/her
How are you? I hope life is treating you well. It's been a year now since we last met. Anyway, I'm writing you to invite you to my country. Let me explain.
7.5
band
Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world, the controversy surrounding environmental issues has been a prominent topic. While some people believe that empty spaces in rural and suburban areas should be allocated to plants for a fresh and healthier environment, others suggest that housing facilities are important in terms of the decreasing cost of living for citizens. From my perspective, constructing more buildings should be granted the exact importance of planting trees, as both of them should equally contribute to better living standards.
7
band
People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.
People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.
4
band
Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is common for people to start a vegetarian diet. Some of them decide to avoid meat because they don’t find eating animals ethic, others because they are convinced meat is a root cause of health problems.
7
band
Today people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the advantages of throwing away society outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, consumerism is growing rapidly. People tend to replace their own things with the latest ones. Although there are some benefits to overconsumption, I will argue that there are for more drawbacks.

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/her to a party at your home and include the following: what the party is about give directions on how to get to your place suggest how to accommodate him/her

Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote better driving habits.

Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the advantages of throwing away society outweigh the disadvantages?