Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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is a growing concern, with many countries reporting increasing levels of obesity. Some believe the problem can be addressed by adding more sports facilities, while others think

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may not be enough. A closer look at the problem will help in assessing these views. Adding sports facilities would certainly be an attractive idea to some.

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,

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proposal does assume that the main reason people are unhealthy is that they

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access to

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facilities. In reality, a combination of factors are to blame for

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issues, and a

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of exercise is only one of these. Among other key factors are poor diet, work stress, and a

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of

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to address them.

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, sophisticated equipment is not essential for getting fit; walking or running in the streets would

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achieve

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.

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, if a

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of facilities is not responsible for current

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problems, simply adding more will not solve them. Clearly, other measures are required to improve public

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. If people

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the

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to take care of themselves,

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we need to find a way to address

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.

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means that, as a society, we need to encourage the idea that taking

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out from the pressures of work has

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benefits. In

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way, not only will work stress be reduced, but people will

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have more

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to exercise. The issue of diet can be tackled by persuading people to cook nutritious meals themselves rather than choosing a faster alternative.

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, these solutions will take

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and, for those who cannot reduce their working hours, are likely to be ineffective. Seemingly, when it comes to solving complex

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problems, there is no simple solution. In conclusion, in my view, giving

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-poor people greater access to sports facilities will not be effective and is too simplistic a solution. Other measures are clearly required, but any action taken to improve public

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requires a change in lifestyle, and

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needs the cooperation of everyone involved.