Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

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Fancy weddings are becoming more fashionable these days. With the emergence of concepts like destination and

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weddings, people are spending huge amounts on marriages. Some people believe in the idea of an expensive and luxurious wedding, whereas others do not agree with

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idea. In my opinion, it is not worth to spend a lot of

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on marriage functions.

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, the wedding is all about two families getting together. It is necessary to make some arrangements for all the guests coming to the function

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as a variety of options to eat and decorating the place.

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, a line needs to be drawn in the amount that

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is spending.

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, in India, people invite families who are not so close which results in an increase in the number of invitees. Apart from

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, the

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that is

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spent on the dresses of the bride and groom is a waste of

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. Especially, nowadays there are dresses which are worn only on the marriage day, as it becomes useless after the ceremony.

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, the concept of a destination wedding is meaningless. People spend extra cash on travel which is not just for the immediate family but

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for the other guests. With many celebrities getting married fancily and luxuriously, the younger generation is getting highly influenced with

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trends.

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will result in extra burden to the parents.

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, parents borrow

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from banks or private

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lenders just to fulfil the wishes of their son\daughter, and they end up paying back the

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rest of their lives.

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, knowing

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's limit is extremely important and making sure they do not suffer in future because of a day's happiness. In conclusion, I believe spending

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on wedding ceremonies is essential but

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should be aware of his\her limits. Always better to plan a budget and follow the same.

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luxuries bring momentary happiness,

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should not get carried away with it and think of long term joy.

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Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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