Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

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Rain forests play a vital role in preserving the wildlife as they provide the livelihood to different variety of
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. Nowadays, destruction of the rain forests is becoming a major concern and
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results in damaging the life of wild creatures, as well as the life of humans. I agree with
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notion as there are several examples in the recent past and in
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essay, I will examine how the deforestation is creating huge problems.
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, with the importance given to the urbanization, the forests are becoming
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soft targets. It is not just about logging of the forests, but
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about invading the space meant for the wild animals. Today, humans are making inroads to the thickest forests and
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, the privacy of
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is lost.
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, cement roads can be seen inside the jungles as part of the commercialization of
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ourism industry
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and making resorts for the humans inside the forest area. While constructing the roads several trees are destroyed and forcing various
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to migrate and eventually resulting in the extinction of
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species
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, governments are encroaching the forest land to industrialize and boost their economy. Forests are usually filled with natural resources, which are essential to many industries.
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by providing the land area closer to the forests or by encroaching and converting them, benefit the factories, it is equally disturbing to animals and has a negative impact on the ecological balance. To illustrate, in India, the government gave permissions to set up a factory close to the forest, which resulted in regular attacks by the wildlife on the factory workers.
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, there was a decrease in the number of many wild animals like Tiger, Lion and Elephants over the years as it is believed that they have migrated to different forests. In conclusion, I strongly agree that
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logging of the rain forests causes irreplaceable damages to the ecology by destroying the lives of many endangered
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, the relation between human and animal will be spoilt as humans are constantly invading the animal's private space.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sink
  • global warming
  • indigenous tribes
  • livelihood
  • displacement
  • cultural erosion
  • soil erosion
  • water cycle
  • humidity levels
  • rainfall patterns
  • droughts
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • climate change
  • logging
  • rain forests
  • habitats
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