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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree?

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Nowadays we are travelling all over the globe for work and study-related purposes.
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 often has spurred the argument that living in a foreign culture and not able to comprehend or speak the native
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 always put
people
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 in serious social and practical issues. I moderately agree with
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 opinion and
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 essay will explain why we face
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 difficulties and
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 suggest a few remedies to tackle
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 an issue. In today's fast-paced world, human beings are travelling the world like never before. As
people
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 have started residing in a foreign
country
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 due to work and study-related commitments, they are often facing problems in relation to the
language
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 barrier.
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, many countries have one
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 policy, which is usually their native
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.
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, I found it really difficult to communicate with my peers, when I was studying in France, as they only responded in french and never understood my question.
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 resulted in serious miscommunication and often put me in a predicament.
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, in an unknown
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,
people
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 usually don't have the idea of the place and its
people
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. In
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 a case, we often find ourselves going in the wrong direction as all of the travelling signboards are usually in a foreign
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.
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, local
people
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 may fool you to pay a higher price for a product.
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, In my time in France, I paid almost double price for a pair of shoes unknowingly, as the
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 restricted my power of bargain.
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, these days due to technological advancement, there are ways to get around an international
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.
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 of all, due to google maps, any person can travel to any part of the world.
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, there are apps like google translate and others which help in communication and learn a
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 spoken by an outsider.
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 of all, if the person who is residing in an outside
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 for a long time, should divulge himself in learning the foreign
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 for his or her betterment. To conclude, In my opinion, there are a plethora of issues associated while living in an international
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 like communication and practical problems which will put
people
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 in a predicament,
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, due to technological advancement, there is a possibility in improving the situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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