In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

With technology racing forward towards a new era and urbanisation happening in all the industries throughout the world, more and more people are transitioning from rural to urban areas. In my opinion, I think that the constant search for a better life with a decent career and a

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care system pushes a sector of the population to go ahead with

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movement, despite the issues they may be forced to face. The foremost reason why humans move to cities

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that there

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not enough employment opportunities for them to make the ends meet. At present, the

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has not created enough work in the rural side for the humans to receive a decent income, and

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, many families are living under the poverty line. Another important cause is that the

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care system is not advanced in the villages. The medical facilities are just bare minimum, and individuals with advanced diseases are not able to avail the best medical treatment

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, every year due to poor

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options in rural places almost 10% of the patients perishes without receiving proper medication. There are many problems that could arise from

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movement. One drawback is that cities can get over-crowded, and

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agricultural lands have to be converted to residential plots for humans to live.

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would end in reduced food production, and

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not enough food would be available for all to consume. Another crucial issue is that an

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urban population would mean that the government ought to allocate more money on the

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care systems, and

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the money

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spent on other sectors might have to be reduced.

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would put a strain in the

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's economy. In conclusion, the increasing urban population poses an additional strain to the cost the

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spends on medical facilities for every individual in the

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, and

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the cost of living reaches a new high.