It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects should not worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree ?

It is commonly believed that

buildings

should be of

utilitarian

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nature rather than just look appealing to the eyes.

However

, I believe that

in addition

, to meeting the prime purpose which is its functionality, high rises ought to be attractive as well. If both approaches go hand

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hand, we can reap the benefits of both. We usually build a high rise in

order

to accommodate a lot of people. To achieve

this

, we must utilize the space effectively and make it more secure so that it can resist

the

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natural calamities.

For instance

, nowadays, most of the architecture in my country must have to pass various mandatory engineering tests, including the capacity to resist strong winds and minor earthquakes, in

order

to qualify for residential

building

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buildings

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.

Thus

, residential

buildings

must make use of available space efficiently and must be safe for the tenants.

On the other hand

, architecture is very important in modern society because it attracts a lot of visitors . In

order

to become commercially viable, a hotel must appeal to a lot of potential clients.

For example

,

State of the art

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architectural designs in Dubai,

such

as Burj Khalifa, are attracting millions of customers every year.

Therefore

, commercial structures should exhibit modern art and unique designs in

order

to stimulate the interest of visitors.

To conclude

,

while

it is believed that modern

buildings

should be constructed on the principle of utilitarianism, I

believed

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that the outlook of the high rise

also

plays an important part. I suggest that residential towers should focus more on functionality, but commercial

buildings

should come up with unique ideas and designs because art and beauty attract the human mind.