Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and reach a conclusion.

A section of the population tends to believe that enrolling
children
in boarding
schools
is the best way to promote proper education. Others claim that boarding
schools
do not benefit
children
in the same proportion as
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egular educational system. Despite the matter of
children
's education is a concernment inherent for each family,
this
essay will discuss both points of view and stand for the
benefits
of not enrolling a child in boarding
schools
. On the one hand, supporters of boarding
schools
usually say that one of the major
benefits
is related to controlling
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youngsters
daily activities and guarantee that they will definitely be guided to maximize results regarding educational development and sports,
for instance
. A study conducted in North America has shown that youngsters enrolled in boarding
schools
tend to do better in elementary subjects
such
as mathematic and science. As we live in a very competitive environment,
this
rise of
efficience
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efficiency
could reflect better
oportunities
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opportunities
for
children
when competing with peers to be accepted in some university,
for example
.
On the other hand
, there is an important factor that can not be evaluated with grade analysis. The ability to create a sense of
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and the development of self-discipline are enormously benefited in
children
who, in childhood, were able to organize their own activities and define their priorities.
Furthermore
, those skills can
also
help a child to overcome obstacles in their future life, increasing in them the capability to take actions for themselves
instead
of passively
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for the situation change. In some countries,
such
as Canada, the encouragement of developing a level of independence in
children
is considered
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valuable asset and, in some cases, overtake
benefits
of attending a boarding school. To summarize,
although
it is possible to highlight
benefits
in both systems, I totally believe that helping
children
to increase their
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and encouraging them to
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their own priorities could lead them to become more
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in the future.
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