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Every year government and individuals spent money on New Year and religious celebration (Agree or disagree).

#year #government #individuals #money #celebration
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It has been observed that from the
last
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 few decades
people
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 are spending a
lot
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 of
money
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 on the
celebrations
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 of the new year and religious festivals.
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, it is becoming a trend to spend
money
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 on the
celebrations
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 whether it is Newyear, Birthday, religious festivals. To a certain point,I agree with that but too much spending on these
celebrations
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 must be prohibited. To start with, different events in your life brings a
lot
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 of happiness, joyness and closeness of relatives.
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,Eidulfiter and Eidul-Adha
people
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 used to spend a
lot
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 of
money
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 on shopping and slaughtering of animals and
also
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 on food items to make different types of dishes on that day.
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, It has
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 been noticed that Government is
also
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 taking part to celebrate different festivals and spend a
lot
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 of
money
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 on it
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 on the New year Eve, 14th August and 6th September government illuminate their buildings with different kinds of lightening and
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 on fireworks. Despite all the positive aspect of
celebrations
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,
people
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 should be aware to not spend too much on any event, as we are living in a Muslim state that does not allow us to spend too much on anything because the excess of everything is bad and will result in destabilization economically. In conclusion, spending on the celebration from the individual or the government must be practised but in a controlled way as these celebration refreshes our mind and we should involve the needy and poor
people
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 with us in the
celebrations
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.
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