Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

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Education is believed to have improved tremendously in the
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few decades, where we have gone from traditional pedagogy to schooling methods that deeply integrate artificial intelligence and computing.
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essay, from my perspective,
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the latter presents plenty of advantages, there are
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demerits that education systems shouldn't neglect.
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with, the systems can be used to collect a large amount of data, it is used to store important data
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as documents, files, pdf, etc., they have a large memory when compared to any living thing or object in the world and they even show the exact content.
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, I store all my data, including the pictures, videos, important graduation gallery, etc., in my electronic device rather than using a limited size pen drive.
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, people become more irresponsible. They are spending hours in front of laptops playing, watching, unnecessary stuff. The children's study has
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been affected by engaging in video games
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as Pubg, GTA, Modern Combat, and Cricket 2007. In
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instance, my cousin has affected his studies by paying more attention to computer games and got suspended from his school for lack of interest in the class. Overall, it is a very positive development, because most of the students take it as positive to enhance their higher studies, rather than cheating. To illustrate, the Canadian University found that the students who used a computer are 50% more likely to get a
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class degree than those who did not use it. In conclusion, mechanics have been increasing for the past few years, as it became a crucial part of the training. Apart from the usefulness of advancements in technology, it makes people very inactive and sedentary.
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