You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain the important event •apologies for the situation •suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Amanda, Hope you're doing well. I'

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afraid I have some bad news, because of an unexpected and important event at work, I have to postpone my trip to Canada. As you know, I'

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in charge of arranging all the meetings and events in the company that I have been working

recently

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for recently

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. There will be a huge exhibition in London in October, so I have to manage the whole opening ceremony with my team. I'

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extremely sorry for the whole thing and I hope that it doesn't

make

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cause

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you any

problem

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. I wasn't expecting

for

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apply

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such

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a big

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near

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the near

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future. If I

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had known

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that

this

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will

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be held in the UK, I'd definitely told you sooner.

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, I'

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sure that I can be there in December for the New Year's holiday. I've heard

canadians

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Canadians

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celebrate Christmas in a great way so I believe

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that time, we'll have lots of fun together. Once

agian

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again

, accept my apologies for any inconvenience. Take care, Tulin

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task achievement

Consider providing a more detailed explanation of the importance of the event to enhance the clarity of your reasons for rescheduling.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that ideas in each paragraph flow smoothly; adding a transition sentence could help improve cohesion.

tone

Good use of a friendly tone in the letter, making it feel personal and engaging.

task achievement

Clear explanation of the reason for rescheduling and a suggested new timeframe for the visit.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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