You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: • explain the situation • tell him/her how you are affected by this • suggest what you want the landlord to do

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Dear Roger, I’m Harry , your tenant in flat 76A of the apartment on spencer road. I’m writing

this

letter to bring your attention to the noise caused by the resident at 76B.

This

has been an issue

over

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a month. Since the tenant, Mr JD moved in flat 76B couple

weeks

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of weeks

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ago. He gets drunk every evening and blasts loud music up till late at night.

I’ m

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not able to tolerate

this

noise that he creates with the music,

however

; I would like to bring in to your notice that my mother has chronic heart trouble. Due to the noise,he creates she can’t sleep through the

night time

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. It's detrimental to her condition. I already talked to him about

this

misbehaving but he doesn’t seem to pay any attention. I’m sorry to complain but I have no choice. Even though other dwellers

also

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not happy about

this

behaviour. I urge you to look into

this

matter.

Otherwise

, I have to move to another flat. I would be grateful for your intervention in

this

matter. Yours faithfully Harry

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

180 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You live in a block of flats, your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: • explain the situation • tell him/her how you are affected by this • suggest what you want the landlord to do

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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