Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The loss of certain
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of plants and animals by some people is considered the main environmental problem of mankind, while others claim that there are much more serious
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in our life. I cannot disagree that
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is a major problem, but in my opinion, more significant
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should be prioritized. On the one hand, plants and animals are the main part of
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, the loss of biodiversity will lead to severe consequences,
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as starvation of people and mass death of living organisms. Humans rely on these main components of nature for food, medicine, building materials and their availability as products. Unfortunately, it threatens global food security and the development of new drugs to avoid diseases. Even if ecosystems can recover, in case of complete loss of populations,
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of which the risk of extinction of certain
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increases, ecological sustainability will be disrupted, and it will cease to be what it used to be.
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, it should be noted that global warming, caused by human actions, is the reason for other ecological
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and affects the entire existence of our planet. Floods, melting glaciers, forest fires, droughts are consequences of global warming, which can
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lead to the death of certain
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, a forest fire in Australia has forced many animals,
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as koalas, to change their habitat, which could result in a decline or extinction of the
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. To sum up, nothing will be solved if you work on only one problem
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since all environmental
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are interconnected.
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, it is worth paying attention to all the
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of humanity and trying to find a solution to them by the governments and individuals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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