I am writing this letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV show by the reporter of the newpaper.

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I am writing

this

letter to express my concern about the comments made on the TV

show

by the reporter of the

newpaper

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newspaper

. The name of

show

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the show

show examples

is Sherlock Holmes and it is related to solving crimes by the detective. One of your

reporter

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reporters

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, Mr Patrick, while giving

interview

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an interview

show examples

on the television, complained about the

show

that

this

programme is creating fears among the viewers by presenting different kinds of crime scenes. I,

however

, disagree with him as

this

detective series make people aware

about

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show examples

different

possibilies

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possibilities

possibility

of criminal activities.

This

fictional

show

is very fascinating and it presents different techniques and methods of solving

puzzzles

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puzzles

with the help of few clues, owing to which I watch

this

show

. Apart from

this

, it

also

assist

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assists

show examples

me in improving my thinking abilities as

soving

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solving

of mysteries requires deep thoughts. I request you to take necessary action against the reporter because his words can affect the popularity of the

show

. He made

these allegation

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this allegation

these allegations

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without analysing the benefits of the

show

. Hope you will take some action against

Mr.

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Patrick.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

178 words

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The Greeting

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