Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Ever since
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became a core part of family life nearly 70 years ago, its usage has been the target of various attacks. While some people have focused on the physical or mental effects, I strongly concur with one of the most prevalent arguments about televisions decimating our sense of family and
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since they discourage communication. On the one hand, there is little doubt that in moderation,
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can keep or even strengthen social connections as people can use it as a common topic to talk about. Unfortunately,
television
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is rarely watched in moderation, which means its effects on social relationships are highly damaging.
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, rather than spending an evening socializing or doing some other social activity, the average family watches three hours of
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.
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to say, it adds up to twenty-one hours over the course of a week, which is nearly an entire day’s worth of
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in front of the
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that could have been spent interacting with the family or
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.
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acts as a stimulus for rising tensions and distances among one's social circles, in turn diminishing an individual's sense of
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.
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, it is
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feasible to observe the serious repercussions of excessive
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usage by comparing it to other potential alternative
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like outdoor
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or even board games. Similar to
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, these
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are primarily for entertainment purposes.
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, both open-air pursuits and board games tend to be incredibly social and are almost an antithesis of quiet
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, not only do we spend a long
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watching
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on average, but
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type of leisure pursuit is
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replacing more social forms of entertainment that would be better at establishing healthy relationships. In conclusion, as a tremendous amount of
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is spent watching
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yearly
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of participating in social
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, I believe that the attacks on
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for impairing our social relations are justified. If we want to preserve our family and
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bonds better in the future, we had better start searching for ways to remedy
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pressing problem.

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