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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today’s unstable word
people
 face with many problems,
one
 of them is increased
crime
 rate. There are a lot of reasons for
this
 issue
such
 as poverty, migration, low social help, lack of jobs, especially well-paid jobs and social media. In my essay I would like to talk about two reasons: poverty and juvenile
crime
. Nowadays more and more well-developed West countries face with migration problem. A lot of
people
 migrate to Europe and United States mainly due to war, political instability, running from extreme poverty, or because of many other reasons. Most of these
people
 don’t have any professional skills and cannot find any job for a long time.
However
, they need to feed their families and themselves and
one
 of the most popular options among many is to start selling drugs or robbery. In new we can often hear
such
 cases especially in districts where main habitants are migrant or refuges. Many politicians support an idea to apply strict restrictions on the migration rules and laws.
Second
,
one
 of the emergent trends is juvenile
crime
. Kids and juniors are immature and can be easily influence by some criminals. In the USA number of crimes committed by
people
 under 18 is growing 5
last
 years. Mainly, those kids are being arrested during selling or delivering drugs. The key reason why those kids committing a
crime
 as they don’t have what to do after school all sport, social activities are paid and their parents can afford it. So, they are playing on the streets without any oversee from parent and becoming an easy catch for drug sellers or other criminal group.
One
 of the most discussed solution is new sport facilities and after school, obligatory activities. To conclude, there are some intimidating trends arise in society which leads to increase in
crime
 rate. But we have means, probably not to fully eliminate but to stop increasing
this
 number even more.
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