Some people think that it's always better to live in the rented accomodation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

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In the present moment many people live in rented accommodation and some individuals believe
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essay . On the one hand, the main advantage of paying rent every month is the cost of the maintenance of the property .
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, if there are any issues related to the state of the house or electronic appliances
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as a heater , the tenant is not liable to financially contribute unless was their own fault .
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the landlord would be the one who would cover the cost . Another advantage
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would be the fact that they would not have to think twice before if they decide to move to another place since they do not have their own house .
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, in a recent interview carried out at a Letting Agency in Cotswold , one of the agents claimed that most of their customers choose to pay rent because they have to move regularly for work purposes .
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, a disadvantage could be that in most
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the cases the tenants are not allowed to alter in any way the building .The accomodating must remain the same as at the beginning of the agreement .
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they have to follow strict instructions . Another disadvantage would be that the monthly payment could be higher than a mortgage .
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there are other fees to be paid before the possible tenant is accepted ,
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costs could be higher than owning an accommodation .
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, the majority of the letting agencies request 2 months in advance plus agent fee and
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inventory tax , costs which would sometimes reach over £2500 . In conclusion , the citizens who always live in rented accommodation save thee money which would be required for the regular improvements required ,
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, they are not allowed to make any major changed to the property .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • mortgage
  • down payment
  • maintenance
  • equity
  • investment
  • restrictions
  • lease
  • appreciate
  • commitment
  • upfront costs
  • residential stability
  • property market
  • rental agreement
  • tenancy
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