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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #form #discipline
In
morden
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modern
 times, it has become increasingly common for
parents
 to use
violence
 to
disciplene
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discipline
 their
children
. While
spaking
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speaking
a
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children
a child
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children
 can create mental problems,
others
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other
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 punishments can be applied without affect kids health. I personally disagree and feel that
violence
 only generate more
violence
 and it not
beneticial
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beneficial
 for
children
's bad behaviour . One of the main fact that
parents
 smack their
children
 is that they received
this
 type of punishment when they were younger. Indeed,
violence
 creates a sense of authority, and
therefore
parents
 hit their youngsters as a method of
discipline
.
For example
,
eldery
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elderly
 people learn how to behave by receiving
violence
 punishment when they followed their
parents
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parent's
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 instructions.
Such
 activity
create
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 a society with many people with mental disorder and violent behaviours. Clearly, hitting a minor is not a solution to
discipline
.
On the other hand
,
communiation
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communication
 is the key to
discipline
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disciplining
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a
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children
a child
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children
. Researches show that
a
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apply
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good communication can provide a better relationship
bettwen
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between
parents
, and
therefore
 minor stay to obey their
parents
. The
next
 generation,
for instance
, will be different adults than their
parents
 who used to receive many hits for bad actions. Future kids would not be suffering from mental health as their
parents
.
Therefore
, communication helps
children
 to learn more and respect other individuals. In conclusion,
although
 hitting someone is not a proper method to
discipline
 junivels, communication needs to be clean and
effetive
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effective
 for a better
relantionship
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relationship
 in families. In my view, I feel that
violence
 generate more cruelty between people.
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