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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The issue of replacing paper
books
 and newspapers with online e-
books
 in the
future
 has grown in importance over the past few years. In my opinion,
although
 printed
books
 are still valuable and prosperous, the move toward free online media is inevitable. On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that technological phenomenons have developed in numerous fields and soon in the
future
 everything will depend on technology, even
books
.
Firstly
, the e-
books
 are completely environmentally-friendly products so undoubtedly
this
 positive feature will make electronic
books
 superior.
For instance
 , by using online media there is no need to cut down thousands of trees for producing papers , so natural resources are protected from destruction.
Moreover
,people do not spend a great deal of money on paper
books
 owing to the free downloadable content on the Internet.
Secondly
, since science has advanced significantly, having a wide source of free information in just one device will be very practical and popular in the
future
.
For example
, people are able to carry hundreds of
books
 and articles in their pockets and have a possibility to read them at any times.
On the other hand
 , traditional printed
books
 have existed for centuries so they have created a sense of belonging and worth . A good example is that paperback
books
 provide the sense of turning pages and the special smell of paper,
therefore
 many people , especially the elderly still prefer to read a hardback storybook rather than an online novel in an e-reader. In conclusion,
however
, reading printed
books
 is still popular , replacing them with online media in the
future
 is undeniable. Because they are so affordable, accessible and above all eco-friendly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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