Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions?

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In recent years tourism has drastically changed from what it used to be. It has been

comercialized

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commercialized

commercialised

and is a vital source of income for thousands of households today. Like any other thing

tourisma

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tourism

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has its pitfalls which are

negetively

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negatively

affecting the

environment

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. I will discuss some of the issues faced by the

environment

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and suggest some solutions in

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essay.

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with, tourism is the major reason for global warming. Due to the increased number of commercial flights, carbon

monooxide

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monoxide

levels have skyrocketed in the air which result in global warming. To resolve

this

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issue government should impose a limit on the number of flights that can stay in the air for a fixed period of time.

This

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will decrease the air traffic and the percentage of harmful gasses will

also

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drop. Another problem is some tourists spread litter at auspicious places while visiting them which not only disrespects the authenticity of the monument but

also

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creats

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creates

create

unhygenic

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unhygienic

environment

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This

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issue can be resolved very easily just by increasing the number of garbage cans at

appropiate

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appropriate

places or putting together a team to clean it regularly.

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, every year

tousands

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thousands

of people visit Juhu Beach in Mumbai, which explains why it often gets dirty. A team from non-profit organization

organizea

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organized

organize

a cleanliness event at Juhu every month,

this

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has dramatically changed the

environment

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around that place. To conclude, there is no doubt that tourism is one of the biggest

revenue generating

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aspect for a country but at the same

time

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it is a threat to

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environment

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the environment

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. So, the

govenrment

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government

and people

has

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have

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to come together as a team to

resove

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resolve

make it more of

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income generator than a point of concern.

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