Ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magazines. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a positive development?

Common
people
try to
copy
the dressing and lifestyle of their favourite celebrities. They do
this
because they are their idols and they prefer to look like them. I consider
this
as a positive development because famous
people
have a few good habits while copying them
people
instill
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these.
Firstly
,
people
copy
their favourite famous
people
because they want to look like them.
This
brings them a sense of happiness. If you like someone, you love to be like them.
People
like their style and dressing sense. They like to wear
same
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attire worn by them. They believe that they will become like them if they
copy
them.
For instance
, a recent survey conducted stated that
college going
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students wear
the
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copy
of designer clothes worn by famous pop stars.
This
makes them feel that they are
also
important like famous
people
.
Hence
, in
desire
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the desire
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to be like famous
people
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they
copy
them.
Secondly
,
people
try to
instill
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the same
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same
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some
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good habits followed by famous
people
. To maintain their bodies they do
excercises
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exercises
exercise
and eat healthy diets. They perform and learn various arts. They dance and put
continous
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continuous
efforts to improve
this
. Common
people
also
try to
copy
these skills. They follow the same diet and
excercise
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exercise
routines followed by their famous
people
.
For instance
, a recent article in a newspaper stated that
people
are becoming healthier because they are following lifestyles of celebrities.
Therefore
, copying famous
people
is a positive trend as
this
helps
people
to inculcate good habits. In conclusion,
trend
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the trend
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of copying famous
people
rapidly burgeoning owing to
people
choice
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the choice
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to look like them. In my
perspective
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this
is a positive development because
this
is helping them to instilled with
better
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a better
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lifestyle.
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