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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most peoples lives.others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilites . Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

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Maturing from children to
adult
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 is an unavoidable journey. Though many people believe teenage years are the happiest of all, few disagree and claim the latter to be happier. There are many events in the
life
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 of
adult
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 or teenagers and the happiest moment can vary from person to person. We will discuss both sides of
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, their challenges and obligation were undertaken by them. We begin our journey which the teenager
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, it starts with school and goes till the end of college
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. During
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 period, most of the time is undertaken as students. Not only the primary responsibility of a student is to learn but
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 explore wide opportunities in other domains.
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, children pursuing their high school encouraged to learn any specific sports like basketball, football or to get divulge in art like music, painting or cooking. These hobbies are useful in real
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 as it provides creative insights to young and curious minds. The liability is mostly limited to self only but encouraged to learn skills useful for future in matters of job or personal
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. 
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 to youth,
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life
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 starts from the job till the end of
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 of a person. They have to undertake many roles like a father, a son, an employer and a husband. Each role has its separate responsibilities attached to it.
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, a father helps in children homework and there well being while a son takes care of their ageing parents through constant care and monitoring. These roles can be exhaustive but rewarding at the same time. The skills learned during teenage lifetime is put to use in real
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. As we mature into an
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, we tend to undertake less learning opportunities more social obligation.  In conclusion, these two lives are completely different but are related to one another. People who enjoy fewer duty and freedom enjoy their younger
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 of their
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life
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. While people enjoyed duty tend to live their
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 lie every day.
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