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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reason for your answer and includes any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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None of the people will purchase the printed newspapers or books in the future so according to some the reading
materials
 should be online without imposing charges. In my opinion, I agree that the reading
materials
 ought to be online for free as it will greatly
benefit
 societies. A good reason the hardcopy for newspapers or books will not be purchased by anyone in the future is that both can be transformed to be read through an online platform. Online reading provides convenience to readers as they do not require a dedicated place to store their reading material.
Besides
 that, the online material can be read via technology
such
 as smartphone and laptops and can be accessible at any time and anywhere. Apart from that, change to the online platform allow us to save a tree and prevent pollution.
For example
, the process to prepare the printed readings require several proses that initiated by a factory that guarantee will release smoke which is not good for human health. Another point to consider is that the reading
materials
 should be available for free as it will increase the scale of readers.
This
 is not only a
benefit
 to local society as it will
also
 give an opportunity to people from other countries to read the
materials
. Aside from that, free reading
materials
 increase the visibility of the
writer
 as the material available for everyone without any cost.
This
 circumstance provides
benefit
 to the
writer
 as various parties can contact them to discuss a matter related to online reading.
As a result
, abundance parties will be benefited from the free online reading and will directly provide
benefit
 to the whole nation to be more creative. In another word, the reading
materials
 prepare by a
writer
 may help readers to think about a solution to a problem that might be resolved through the reading. To conclude, reading material is a must to be available through an online platform without any charges as it will increase the accessibility to many people across the world and
also
 raise the visibility of the
writer
.
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