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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People
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 have different views on how
progress
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 should be measured in their
countries
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. Economic
progress
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 is believed by a growing number of
people
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 to be the most fundamental goal which should be achieved, while I agree with those who think that authorities should place equal importance on other kinds of
progress
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 as well. On the one hand, economic growth is a key consideration when judging improvement in
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.
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 growth is vital for
countries
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 as it can provide
people
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 with more job opportunities which can result in alleviating poverty.
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, as governments attain more economical goals, the sources of funds would increase and
people
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 who are in charge would be able to create more jobs with higher salaries.
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, as
people
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 would earn more money,the rate of poverty would increase and more
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 would enjoy welfare.
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, placing a premium on making
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 in monetary fields is of benefit for citizens.
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, there are other types of
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 ,
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 as environmental and mental ones, which should be made by governments because they are as crucial as economic growth. Making
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 in the environmental fields is vitally important for
countries
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. Enhancing
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’ environmental status by accomplishing eco-friendly goals ,
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 as planting more trees and minimizing the amount of air pollution, can result in the survival of our
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 generation and the preservation of the earth.
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 ,making
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 in
people
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’s mental well-being is considered to be so important because unless
people
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 are mentally healthy, the other kinds of
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 will unable to be achieved and
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people
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 will not have a sense of satisfaction in their lives. In conclusion, even though the significance of economic
progress
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 is undeniable, governments should make
progress
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 in the environment and citizens’ mental health.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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