In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In several states of
America
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there are limitations of
time
when teenagers could be outside except the situation when they are accompanied by an adult. I partly agree with
this
initiative and in
this
essay, I will explain the reasons for my opinion. On the one hand,
this
limitation could help to
control
crimes committed by adolescences by their careless behaviour.
For example
,most crimes committed by teenagers are being made under drugs or alcohol intoxication, which they tried for the
first
time
and could not
control
themselves. The only way to curb
this
situation is to
control
a teenager’s spare
time
in the evening because most of them are studying in the daytime.
Furthermore
,
this
initiative could help to improve children’s education because parents could
control
the educational process more easily while their kids at home.
For example
, the
last
survey reveals that educational rates significantly increased in states where ‘curfew’ was applied.
On the other hand
,
such
restrictions could affect people’s psychics by limitation of their freedom and will.
For instance
, it is common practice for some teens to work after school in their leisure
time
to get money for college and their needs.
This
is an important part of financial education and nurturing a child's responsibility and
such
type of prohibitions can have bad consequences in the future.
However
, some individuals can
also
think that
this
effort can be a violation of human rights and they will be right and there should be special points in the constitution to do that. In sum, I want to conclude that ‘curfew’ could be beneficial in some situations, but should be strictly controlled by the government. In the
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I hope that there will be no need for
such
restrictions and teenagers could develop fully under the
control
of their parents.
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  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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