In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In several states of

America

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there are limitations of

time

when teenagers could be outside except the situation when they are accompanied by an adult. I partly agree with

this

initiative and in

this

essay, I will explain the reasons for my opinion. On the one hand,

this

limitation could help to

control

crimes committed by adolescences by their careless behaviour.

For example

,most crimes committed by teenagers are being made under drugs or alcohol intoxication, which they tried for the

first

time

and could not

control

themselves. The only way to curb

this

situation is to

control

a teenager’s spare

time

in the evening because most of them are studying in the daytime.

Furthermore

,

this

initiative could help to improve children’s education because parents could

control

the educational process more easily while their kids at home.

For example

, the

last

survey reveals that educational rates significantly increased in states where ‘curfew’ was applied.

On the other hand

,

such

restrictions could affect people’s psychics by limitation of their freedom and will.

For instance

, it is common practice for some teens to work after school in their leisure

time

to get money for college and their needs.

This

is an important part of financial education and nurturing a child's responsibility and

such

type of prohibitions can have bad consequences in the future.

However

, some individuals can

also

think that

this

effort can be a violation of human rights and they will be right and there should be special points in the constitution to do that. In sum, I want to conclude that ‘curfew’ could be beneficial in some situations, but should be strictly controlled by the government. In the

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I hope that there will be no need for

such

restrictions and teenagers could develop fully under the

control

of their parents.