In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In several states of

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there are limitations of

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when teenagers could be outside except the situation when they are accompanied by an adult. I partly agree with

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essay, I will explain the reasons for my opinion. On the one hand,

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limitation could help to

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crimes committed by adolescences by their careless behaviour.

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,most crimes committed by teenagers are being made under drugs or alcohol intoxication, which they tried for the

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and could not

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themselves. The only way to curb

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situation is to

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a teenager’s spare

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in the evening because most of them are studying in the daytime.

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initiative could help to improve children’s education because parents could

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the educational process more easily while their kids at home.

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survey reveals that educational rates significantly increased in states where ‘curfew’ was applied.

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restrictions could affect people’s psychics by limitation of their freedom and will.

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, it is common practice for some teens to work after school in their leisure

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to get money for college and their needs.

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is an important part of financial education and nurturing a child's responsibility and

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type of prohibitions can have bad consequences in the future.

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effort can be a violation of human rights and they will be right and there should be special points in the constitution to do that. In sum, I want to conclude that ‘curfew’ could be beneficial in some situations, but should be strictly controlled by the government. In the

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I hope that there will be no need for

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restrictions and teenagers could develop fully under the

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of their parents.