The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity ?

To begin
with, throughout the world there is a rise in poverty, food shortage and loss of employment due to
ever-increasing
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of population.
Thus
, I completely agree with the above statement and
Firstly
, my essay will talk about the various problem that mankind is facing and
Secondly
, the causes which have inflicted
this
huge problem. Currently in the modern world, one of the biggest problem humanity is facing is
of
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food shortage and
this
is because there are more
people
than the land available. More and more farming lands are being converted into buildings and structures to create a habitat for the
people
to live in. Other important problems like poverty and loss of employment go hand in hand where for one empty position there are more than 1000 applicants
moreover
, nowadays companies are hiring young
people
who can work harder and faster than old experience person and guess what they come at a very cheap price to the institution.
For example
, In Mumbai when
the
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Reliance listed the job opening for the position of Director on Linked in, it was seen that more than 25000 candidates applied for it.
On the contrary
, two major problems that
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contributed most
in
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the increase of the citizens are the lack of education and Climate change. There is an increase seen in a number of floods and massive rainfall which has directly affected to the
people
leaving in the rural areas where they depend upon agriculture production for their lively hood and when the employment of theirs get affected they migrate to cities looking for work. Another thing is
lot
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of individuals in the village don't get proper schooling and are deprived of family planning knowledge.
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, the Nuclear family of
countryside
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a countryside
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human would consist of 5 to 6
people
where he can barely meet the ends. To conclude, the rising public is a major threat faced by
the
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every nation in the globe and which has resulted in numerous other problems and
hence
I completely agree with the above statement.
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