The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity ?
To begin
with, throughout the world there is a rise in poverty, food shortage and loss of employment due to ever-increasing
of population. Correct article usage
the ever-increasing
Thus
, I completely agree with the above statement and Firstly
, my essay will talk about the various problem that mankind is facing and Secondly
, the causes which have inflicted this
huge problem.
Currently in the modern world, one of the biggest problem humanity is facing is of
food shortage and Change preposition
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this
is because there are more people
than the land available. More and more farming lands are being converted into buildings and structures to create a habitat for the people
to live in. Other important problems like poverty and loss of employment go hand in hand where for one empty position there are more than 1000 applicants moreover
, nowadays companies are hiring young people
who can work harder and faster than old experience person and guess what they come at a very cheap price to the institution. For example
, In Mumbai when the
Reliance listed the job opening for the position of Director on Linked in, it was seen that more than 25000 candidates applied for it.
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On the contrary
, two major problems that has
contributed most Change the verb form
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in
the increase of the citizens are the lack of education and Climate change. There is an increase seen in a number of floods and massive rainfall which has directly affected to the Change preposition
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people
leaving in the rural areas where they depend upon agriculture production for their lively hood and when the employment of theirs get affected they migrate to cities looking for work. Another thing is lot
of individuals in the village don't get proper schooling and are deprived of family planning knowledge. Change the article
a lot
For example
, the Nuclear family of countryside
human would consist of 5 to 6 Correct article usage
a countryside
people
where he can barely meet the ends.
To conclude, the rising public is a major threat faced by the
every nation in the globe and which has resulted in numerous other problems and Remove the article
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hence
I completely agree with the above statement.Submitted by dhruv3890 on
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