Airplane uses more fuel and causes more pollution than car do. In such a case non-essential air travel should be discouraged in order to make the environment better rather than limiting the car use to what extend do you agree.

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essential

air

travel

should be encouraged because aeroplanes consume

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enormous fuel and cause

air

pollution.

Although

this

cause environmental issues, I believe only limiting

air

travel

is not acceptable, excessive

use

of

cars

should be stopped because

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of

cars

is rapidly increasing which emit harmful gases and private using

cars

can easily be eliminated without any huge impact on comfort.

Firstly

,

number

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of private

cars

is burgeoning at an enormous rate. These emit harmful gas carbon dioxide

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the

air

.

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gas is an indispensable factor in causing global warming.

Cars

are considered

as

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a necessity than a luxury that's why people are buying these at an increasing rate.

This

is causing a huge impact on the environment.

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,

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recent research stated that

cars

are the major reason behind the increased global temperature.

Therefore

, more focus should be on car

travel

than

air

travel

.

Secondly

,

air

travel

is not used privately,

this

is

a public

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travel

;

nevertheless

,

cars

are used mostly for private purpose. Excessive

use

of

cars

can easily be eliminated. The

cars

can be avoided to be used to visit nearby markets.

This

will not affect the ease and comfort of people.

On the other hand

, if

air

travel

is encouraged to

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, people have to

travel

for

longer

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hours. They have to suffer in long travels.

For instance

, a recent survey conducted that those who avoid

air

travel

often face issues due to long

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travel

.

Hence

, it will be beneficial for

public

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if excessive usage of

cars

is eliminated than aeroplanes. In conclusion,

air

travels are for ease of public and they are less detrimental than

cars

. I consider excessive

use

of

cars

should be avoided .