In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The consumption of fast
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has increased and replaced a home-based
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trend in many nations. While some believe that having fast
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save
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, In my opinion, eating too much fast
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can lead to serious
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issues. Buying fast
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from a shop save us our precious
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.
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is because many
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are more career-oriented these days, and they do not want to spend their
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on mundane things like preparing their lunch or dinner.
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, they prefer to get ready-made
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from a shop so they would be able to spend more
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on their
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.
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, most
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in Japan
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nearly 12 to 15 hours a day,
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they do not have enough
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and energy left when they go home after
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.
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, I believe fast
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is hazardous for
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.
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junk
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can be bought easily from a shop, it can cause too many
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conditions.
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is to say that,
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who consume fast
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on a daily basis become obese and obesity leads to many
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problems,
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as heart issues and diabetes, later in life.
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, it puts a lot of strain on
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service and the patient has to go through a plethora of pain, so
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why the government should look into
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matter.
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, the state of Pakistan increase the tax on fast
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every year to reduce the demand for it because any extra money would be added to the normal cost increases the price and fewer
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will be able to afford the
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.
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should not consume a large amount of junk
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in order to stay healthy and so they do not have to go to a hospital for treatment. In conclusion, more and more
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eating fast
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instead
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of home-based
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in many countries. Many
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are of opinion that it is a good option to save their
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for more important
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, I believe daily consumption of fast
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leads to many
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problems and put a man in a difficult situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional value
  • culinary heritage
  • preserve traditions
  • global cuisine
  • obesity epidemic
  • dietary habits
  • convenience factor
  • food culture
  • sustainable practices
  • local produce
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