In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on arts. However, others think government should spend more money on health and education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The
government
shows a tendency to spend more money on arts
than another important issue that has been thought about by many individuals. Contrary to, there is a broad idea that the budget of the government
should be used for improving education
and health
. In my view, although
arts
have an irreplaceability for society, there are many significant topics, such
as education
and health
, which are waiting to be solved as a first
priority. The aim of this
essay is to discuss the topic with both the merits and the demerits.
To begin
with, it is important to bear in mind that health
and education
are the fundamental rights of every humankind regardless of nationality, religion and sex. Therefore
, they should be supplied immediately by the government
. When the people
have a right to reach a qualified education
and organized health
care, they would be more productive and satisfied, which is why arts
also
would flourish more with regards to humans which are supplied the fundamental rights. For example
, Maslow Pyramid has said that individuals' needs have an important order and the first
step should be handled first
. With regard to this
, doubtlessly education
and health
come before the arts
as basic needs of people
.
On the other hand
, people
have been learning the nature of humans and also
they are exploring a better way to express themself with the bright power of arts
. They would be able to be more aware of the world and as a consequence of it, their benefit to the public should be maximized by learning arts
. Furthermore
, By investing in arts
, the government
is able to improve the life quality of the public and they would be more sensitive to the general society's drawbacks such
as environmental problems and violence against women. Thus
, arts
have the potential to make the world a better place than now and there is no doubt that the government
should spend money on arts
in order to improve society and people
quality.
To summarize, however
teaching arts
have the potential to make people
more sensitive to each other and their environment, there are many significant problems that should be solved as the high priority such
as education
and health
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