People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

THERE ARE A PLETHORA OF REASONS WHY INDIVIDUALS DECIDED TO GO FOR A
COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITIES.
FOR EXAMPLE
, OBTAIN HIGHER LEVELS OF
KNOWNLEDGE
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KNOWLEDGE
AND GAIN EXPERIENCE IN COOPERATIONS JOBS AND STARTING TO BE PREPARED FOR THE REAL WORD OF TRADES. STUDY IN A
COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITY IS A PRIVILEGE FOR THOSE WHO HAVE THE OPPORTUNITY. IN MY COUNTRY,
FOR EXAMPLE
, MAJORITY SOCIETY IS NOT ABLE TO ENTER IN A
COLLEGE
BECAUSE TEENAGERS HAVE NO CONDITION TO GRADUATED IN HIGH SCHOOL, WHICH IS A CRITERIA TO INGRESS IN A SUPERIOR INSTITUTION. IT IS REQUIRED TO THOSE JOUVENALS TO START
WORK
BEFORE FINISHING THEIR STUDIES AND,
THEREFORE
, THE GAVE UP ON CONTINUING STUDYING.
BECAUSE
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THE NECESSITY OF GAIN MONEY, PEOPLE ARE NOT INSTRUCTED ON THE IMPORTANCE OF ATTEND COLLEGES OR UNIVERSITIES AND HOW IT COULD POSITIVELY IMPACT ON THEIR LIVES,
SPECIALLY
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IN THE FINANCIAL AREA. I USED TO KNOWN PEOPLE THAT NEED TO DECIDE WHETHER STUDY OR
WORK
.
CONSEQUENTLY
, DUE TO THE REALITY OF MY COUNTRY, THE PERSON HAVE DECIDED TO
WORK
AND HIS LIFE COULD BE BETTER IF HE HAD DECIDED DIFFERENTLY. THOSE INSTITUTIONS OF EDUCATIONS ARE A FIELD FULL OF UNIQUE PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCES,
SUCH
AS
VOLUNTAIRE
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VOLUNTARY
JOBS AND COOPERATION OCCUPATIONS DURING THE STUDIES. AND THESE CHANGES ARE OF PIVOTAL IMPORTANCE FOR A STUDENT INCREASE HIS OR HER RESUME.
BESIDES
, IN CONSEQUENCES OF THESE JOBS THROUGH THE
UNIVERSITES
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UNIVERSITIES
UNIVERSITY
, IS IT AN ENORMOUS OPPORTUNITY FOR CONSOLIDATE NETWORKING.
ADDITIONALLY
,
THIS
ONE IS CRUCIAL FOR ADOLESCENTS START WORKING AFTER GRADUATED, BECAUSE PEOPLE USED TO INDICATE WHO IS WILLING TO
WORK
.
THIS
BEHAVIOR IS
FIRSTLY
NOTED AT COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITIES. IN CONCLUSION, I CONSIDER THAT FOLKS WHO DECIDED TO START STUDY IN A
COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITY WANT TO RECEIVE AN INCREASE UNIQUE
KNOWNLEDGES
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KNOWLEDGES
.
MOREOVER
, THEY WISH TO BE PREPARED TO
WORK
IN THE REAL WORLD AND MAKE A CAREER. IN A NUTSHELL, THESE EDUCATIONAL INSTITUTIONS ARE THE
RIGH
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PLACE FOR THEM ACHIEVE THESES AIMS.
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