People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
THERE ARE A PLETHORA OF REASONS WHY INDIVIDUALS DECIDED TO GO FOR A
COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITIES. FOR EXAMPLE
, OBTAIN HIGHER LEVELS OF KNOWNLEDGE
AND GAIN EXPERIENCE IN COOPERATIONS JOBS AND STARTING TO BE PREPARED FOR THE REAL WORD OF TRADES.
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KNOWLEDGE
COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITY IS A PRIVILEGE FOR THOSE WHO HAVE THE OPPORTUNITY. IN MY COUNTRY, FOR EXAMPLE
, MAJORITY SOCIETY IS NOT ABLE TO ENTER IN A COLLEGE
BECAUSE TEENAGERS HAVE NO CONDITION TO GRADUATED IN HIGH SCHOOL, WHICH IS A CRITERIA TO INGRESS IN A SUPERIOR INSTITUTION. IT IS REQUIRED TO THOSE JOUVENALS TO START WORK
BEFORE FINISHING THEIR STUDIES AND, THEREFORE
, THE GAVE UP ON CONTINUING STUDYING. BECAUSE
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. CONSEQUENTLY
, DUE TO THE REALITY OF MY COUNTRY, THE PERSON HAVE DECIDED TO WORK
AND HIS LIFE COULD BE BETTER IF HE HAD DECIDED DIFFERENTLY.
THOSE INSTITUTIONS OF EDUCATIONS ARE A FIELD FULL OF UNIQUE PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCES, SUCH
AS VOLUNTAIRE
JOBS AND COOPERATION OCCUPATIONS DURING THE STUDIES. AND THESE CHANGES ARE OF PIVOTAL IMPORTANCE FOR A STUDENT INCREASE HIS OR HER RESUME. Correct your spelling
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BESIDES
, IN CONSEQUENCES OF THESE JOBS THROUGH THE UNIVERSITES
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UNIVERSITY
ADDITIONALLY
, THIS
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. THIS
BEHAVIOR IS FIRSTLY
NOTED AT COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITIES.
IN CONCLUSION, I CONSIDER THAT FOLKS WHO DECIDED TO START STUDY IN A COLLEGE
OR UNIVERSITY WANT TO RECEIVE AN INCREASE UNIQUE KNOWNLEDGES
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KNOWLEDGES
MOREOVER
, THEY WISH TO BE PREPARED TO WORK
IN THE REAL WORLD AND MAKE A CAREER. IN A NUTSHELL, THESE EDUCATIONAL INSTITUTIONS ARE THE RIGH
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