Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

Generally, medicine
trials
are performed on animals or by computer-based examination before applying on individuals, except those which are a non-serious impact on human beings. While
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
a certain group of people are in favour of all new
trials
should straightly apply to the end-users suffering from the disease, whereas, it has some pros and cons.
However
, I am fully disagreeing with the viewpoint of a direct test on human
life
.
Trials
can give both results whether successful or unsuccessful, and it would be very critical to release medicine in the open market without getting the authentic output. If
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
experts would directly test medicines on human
life
, they put the
life
at risk by ignoring its
further
symptoms. Apart from
this
, it would be more difficult to procure the side-effects, as at that time they would be unaware that, how dangerous it will?
For example
, during a covid-19 pandemic, in some countries
trials
are applied on infected persons and it was lead to result in death for some cases.
Therefore
, human
trials
have a lot of ill-effects
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
and a great loss to the precious
life
of individuals.
On the other hand
, sometimes
patient
Add an article
the patient
a patient
show examples
is in critical conditions with unidentified viruses, at that time to save that
life
immediate
trials
are applied to them, which would result in both sides positive or negative. As, nobody in the medical field intentionally put the
life
at risks, unless
such
a
situation
arises and
also
pressure to save the
life
of other public.
In addition
to
this
, they are
also
unaware of what kind of the disease, whether it is communicable or not.
For example
, in Wuhan, which is the epic centre of covid-19, they are unable to control the worse
situation
as it was transferring one to another.
Hence
, in
such
kind of ,
situation
Add an article
a situation
the situation
show examples
it is beneficial to directly trial to take
chance
Add an article
the chance
a chance
show examples
to save that person and millions of others. In conclusion, even though there are many drawbacks of human
trials
which lead to serious outcomes,
however
, in ,particular
situation
benefits can
also
not to be ignored.
Submitted by naresh on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: