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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot of a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree.

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Today, we are not living on
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big planet earth, we a living in a small global village, in which daily we are meeting new
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. Even though there are many countries in
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 beautiful world, it has become easy to recognise a person based on the
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 they wear. I wholeheartedly believe that a person's attire tells us many things about the
culture
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 and their character. In
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 essay,
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 I will discuss some arguments supporting my idea, after which some aspects against it will be presented. On the one hand, many
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 support the former's statement that the choice of
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 tells us about one's
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 , for many noteworthy reasons.
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, one's personality and
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 describe from which country or state the person belongs . To illustrate it
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, in my home country India, each state is having its own type of special
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. So from the golden age to till-now
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 follows their tradition.
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, if some a girl wear a blouse and skirt with a scarf it represents that she belongs to the Gujarat state and it is often said that the Gujarati
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 mostly like sweets and they are very calm in nature.
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, some
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 disagree with the statement as they think it doesn't provide us with much information. Nowadays, not like the older days ,
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 enjoy wearing
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 from other
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.
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, not all persons from the same
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 follow the same traditions.
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, both Indian and Muslim boys like to wear kurta pyjamas so now we won't be able to recognise them.
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,
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's nature and habits change with time and mainly it is getting affected by
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 near them. To put it in a nuts shell, I pen down saying that, Even though in today's modern era
people
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 started adopting different
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's
clothes
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 but still the majority of
people
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 follows their traditions and moral values related to it.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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