You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

Dear Pat, I'm just writing
this
letter to let you know that I left my coat at your place when I visited a few days ago. When I was at your home I wore my coat and
while
helping you in the kitchen I removed it and
then
later we were busy watching television and I didn't remember that. After arriving home I observed I left it there. It's a black leather coat with a white patch on the left pocket. I think that I placed it in the living room big sofa. In my right pocket, it has my card holder which contains a debit card, driving licence, health card and mobile charger. As I am very busy next week it's very difficult for me to pick. I can come after 25 November 2023, so one of
cousins
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will come to pick it up because I really need everything for my daily purposes I cannot drive without
driving
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licence. Keep in touch, Chris
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Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and is followed by supporting details for stronger coherence.
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Work on transitions between paragraphs for a smoother flow and overall cohesion.
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Provide more elaboration on each point within the paragraphs for a richer response and to fully meet the task's requirements.
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Maintain a formal tone appropriate for the context throughout the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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