Some people today struggle to use modern electronic technology such as smart phones and computers. Why do you think this is ? What can be done to solve this problem ?
In
this
modern era, technology enhancement is increased by leaps and bounds. Although
it is a widely positive revolution, there are some people who face difficulties operating the modern device. I think this
is because of literacy problems. In subsequent paragraphs illustrate some of the reasons and possible solutions.
To begin
with, what are the reasons because of which some individuals experience the problem
to use smartphones, microwave ovens or other electronic devices
? One of the reasons may be the literacy level. In past, most of the persons finished their education in their native languages and in present all these electronic instruments operating language
is English. By dint of it, some elders cannot run these devices
. For example
, my father cannot operate electronic devices
due to a lack of English knowledge.
On the other side, some of the researchers are getting engaged to solve this
problem
. For instance
, a plethora of smartphones, computers are available in various languages which may solve this
problem
. Elders who studied in their native language
can operate these electronic devices
in their own language
and if they found difficulties in typing, lots of talking applications are also
available, in which they just need to give instruction in their language
. It may also
solve this
problem
from the root.
To conclude, I opine that by using modern technology and research the subject line fact may be resolved. But in parallel, the elder's involvement to operate any electronic devices
is also
very important consciously. Else, all the hard-works of scientists go in vain.Submitted by HEMAL PATEL on
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