It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the issue of providing international aids has drawn the attention of the public worldwide. Many

people

argue that it is hard to support all of the world’s residents and

governments

should focus on their domestic satisfaction rather than offering international aid

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other

countries

.

Although

I agree with

this

argument that it is impossible to help all the world’s

citizens

, I disagree with them that administrations should concentrate solely on

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local needs. In

this

essay, I will discuss my point of view thoroughly. On the one hand, the world’s leaders’ hesitation over the provision of international aids to undeveloped regions is legitimate. It is unreasonable that

governments

’ support could reach all of the poor as their number is enormous and they exist in separate places around the globe.

In addition

, these community members have a myriad of needs and

this

could lead to various issues in helping them. Developed

countries

,

for instance

, may encounter numerous obstacles as they send food and medical aids to poor communities in Africa due to the lack of transportation and severe climate conditions. Because of

such

issues,

governments

spend money to assist other

countries

, while they struggle to take care of their public because of the local financial burdens.

In other words

, leaders should prioritize the well-being of their

citizens

before spending much money on

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assistant, which could affect their economy drastically.

On the other hand

,

governments

should help as many

people

as they can regardless of the notion of helping all

people

on the planet. Rich

countries

should assist struggling ones in their vital humanitarian sectors

such

as health, nutrition and education. Nations,

for instance

, that include

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threat of famine or contagions

such

as Yemen should be assisted by its neighbours.

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humanitarian cause of assistance will have a considerable psychological impact on residents of prosperous regions as well as the poor.

This

appears as they deter any sense of alienation, fragmentation, or lost in favour of the enjoyment of charity and belonging to the world public.

Therefore

, helping

citizens

overseas not only helps the poor to live respectfully but

also

promotes the idea of self-devotion and belonging among rich publics. In conclusion, in

opinion

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,

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world leaders should lend their struggling

neighbors

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a hand to offer help to

people

in need. If

governments

should satisfy the domestic needs of their

citizens

, and assist others to promote good humanitarian relationships

besides

achieving political

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among nations.