Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
consider that
technology
has made
people
's
life
difficult so it is better
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
not to use it. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because it has made
life
easy and united
people
which helps to ease the
life
of
people
.
Firstly
,
technology
has made
life
easy by reducing physical efforts at difficult jobs. Labours had to carry heavy loads at construction work. Automated machines that carry
heavy weights
Correct your spelling
heavyweights
show examples
had made
such
work easy.
Further
, housewives used to wash clothes with their hands but now they can easily wash these in washing-machines.
For instance
, in
warehouses
Add a comma
,warehouses
show examples
automated machines load heavy products earlier men used to perform
this
.
Hence
,
technology
has made difficult jobs easy and made the
life
of
people
easy because they do not need to
preform
Correct your spelling
perform
show examples
difficult work with huge physical efforts.
Secondly
,
technology
has connected
people
through social media. Now they can share thoughts and ideas with their closed ones. They can stay in touch with relatives and friends.
This
all is feasible due to
technology
.
This
has become a medium to exchange thoughts. Humans need to be social to feel relax and better. Social media platform helps them to stay interacted.
For instance
,
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
recent research stated that social websites help
people
to fight against the sense of loneliness.
Therefore
,
people
can share their thoughts and feel better which make their
life
less complicated. In conclusion,
technology
has made
life
easy
Add the comma(s)
,easy
show examples
not complex. I disagree with
this
statement that
this
should not be used because
this
made difficult jobs easy and connected
people
globally.
Submitted by Priya on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: