Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

It is generally claimed that people tend to hunt animals to

such

a point where most of them are on the verge of being extinct in today's complex society.

Although

there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of

this

trend, I strongly believe that society can take steps to mitigate

this

potential problem. One of the main solutions can be considered that the

government

should establish the

organization

being accountable for animals

which

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are allowed to be hunted.

This

body ought to oversee people who want to go hunting. Several ways can be thought to control

this

situation.

For example

, the

organization

can send one of

authorities

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from the

organization

with hunters together in order to accompany them.

Thus

, they can prevent extreme hunting in

this

way. Another key solution is that the responsible

government

body may hire peasants from the countryside where is

next

to the hunting area. It is because villagers are aware of the depth of forests and know how to reach

to

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the untouched lots. Take India

for example

, the

government

always keeps in touch with poor peasants to get information in shooting seasons.

Therefore

, employing villagers to spy on animal shooters will be beneficial for the

government

to hinder excess hunting. To conclude, various measures can be taken to tackle the problem that

are

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certain to arise as hunters surpass the limit for hunting. Creating a responsible

organization

and appointing people living in the village to

this

issue could probably solve the problem.