the gap between rich and poor is increasing. What problems does it cause? What solution s can you suggest.

The distinction between wealthy and needy people has been significantly widening these days.
This
serious disparity has caused a detrimental impact on the distribution of
resourses
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among the population.
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, The government plays a vital role in
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the effects of
this
problem. One
the
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siginficant
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problems caused by the increased
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between rich and poor is that the availability of resources would be controlled by one party, who have more money. Those who have more fund can have wide access to
superior
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range of greatly modernized facilities and highly qualified institutions
such
as
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, schools and shopping malls.
However
, those who suffer from poverty can not afford
having
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all their basic needs,
such
as better education, food and housing, and
this
is because the majority of them are working in minor jobs while
rish
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people has dominated all
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occupations and all the chairs in the best of universities.
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problem could be rectified by
the
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government contribution. It can impose higher taxes on the
income
of wealthy citizens in order to use these taxes for providing more funds to those who have lower
income
.Hollan is a prime example, where the public authority deducts ten
percent
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from the
income
of any resident having more than 20000 per month.
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law has enabled holland to provide additional aids for those who are deprived
from
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their basic rights , and
therefore
, the disparity between the two layers has started to decline. To sum up, one of
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impact of having large
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between rich and poor is the amount of resources goes mostly to those who have money, but
this
can
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by taking higher taxes on people having
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to
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the distribution of
income
between these two categories.
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