Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
historical items have more methods to display in the modern world due to the
technology
developing.People
are getting used to participant in exhibitions through computers
on the internet. Some people
think we do not need public museums
anymore because human beings have computers
now, however
, I partly disagree with the viewpoint, the statement will be discussed in the following article.
on one hand, technology
such
as VR, AR does bring intense virtual effects for us to create more chances for people
to explore public museums
even when they stay at home. For example
, the young could wear VR glasses to attend virtual activities of museums
online. To specify, computers
do bring massive potential to let people
understand historical knowledge better rather than being in museums
themselves.Therefore
, visiting museums
by computers
or other technology
is a new method that should be suggested to more people
.
However
, the real historical objects could provide the true atmosphere that the guests are not able to feel by computers
. For instance
, a vase has a millennium years history, people
could see the dust and scars on the surface of the vase directly when they come to the museum, but, they could not see these details so clearly even if the computer screens could offer a high-resolution quality.Thus
, real museums
are a unique way to let people
feel the exhibitions rather than visiting computers
.
To conclude, computers
and technology
are vital for museums
such
as exhibitions, activities, however
, to go to museums
physically is necessary as well because some historical emotions never could be expressed or introduced by virtual screens.Submitted by oceanplus on
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