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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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According to some
people
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 a nation should self sustain
there
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their
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 food needs rather than importing from outside. I fully agree with the statement above which have a wide variety of benefits. Strong
agriculture based
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agriculture-based
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 countries
posses
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possess
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 many benefits which
helps
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help
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 the
country
 to improve there economy.
To begin
 with, when the
country
 begins producing there needs internally it increase the demand for local farmers which will ultimately help them to uplift there income. As
and
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 example, local
famers
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farmers
 can sell locally produced vegetables at a better price than imported vegetables with fresh quality,
hence
 the demand will go up for
such
 vegetables.
Secondly
, when the
agri
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 sector improves it indirectly
exapnd
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expand
, and create more job opportunities in all the sectors which are involved and will
indrectly
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indirectly
directly
 help to reduce the unemployment problems in
rulal
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rural
 areas in developing countries.
In addition
 to
this
, the government will start investing
on
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the
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apply
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infrastructure development in the areas
such
 as
transportaion
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transportation
, water and electricity which will be
a
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 important factor for the
lifestlye
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lifestyle
 of these people.
Furthermore
, native farming methods can be improved to put a stop to the usage of chemical
fertilizar
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fertilizer
, which is becoming the
rootcause
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root cause
 for
increasing
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 level of cancer patients in the world. As an example, researchers have found that
majority
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 of the cancer patients had excessive amounts of substances which
is
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 included in
such
fertilizar
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fertilizer
 which have lost many
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lives
lifes
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lives
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.
Finally
 all of the above will help a
country
 to reduce
there
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their
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importaion
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importation
 cost and increase there foreign reserves which can be vital for a stable economy. In conclusion, countries must invest in producing
there
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their
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 food needs internally, since it will not only help to have healthy citizens but
also
 help to boost the economy of a
country
 quickly.
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