Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some
people
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a nation should self sustain
there
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food needs rather than importing from outside. I fully agree with the statement above which have a wide variety of benefits. Strong
agriculture based
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countries
posses
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many benefits which
helps
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the
country
to improve there economy.
To begin
with, when the
country
begins producing there needs internally it increase the demand for local farmers which will ultimately help them to uplift there income. As
and
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example, local
famers
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farmers
can sell locally produced vegetables at a better price than imported vegetables with fresh quality,
hence
the demand will go up for
such
vegetables.
Secondly
, when the
agri
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sector improves it indirectly
exapnd
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expand
, and create more job opportunities in all the sectors which are involved and will
indrectly
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indirectly
directly
help to reduce the unemployment problems in
rulal
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rural
areas in developing countries.
In addition
to
this
, the government will start investing
on
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the
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infrastructure development in the areas
such
as
transportaion
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transportation
, water and electricity which will be
a
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important factor for the
lifestlye
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lifestyle
of these people.
Furthermore
, native farming methods can be improved to put a stop to the usage of chemical
fertilizar
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fertilizer
, which is becoming the
rootcause
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root cause
for
increasing
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level of cancer patients in the world. As an example, researchers have found that
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of the cancer patients had excessive amounts of substances which
is
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included in
such
fertilizar
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fertilizer
which have lost many
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lives
lifes
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lives
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.
Finally
all of the above will help a
country
to reduce
there
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importaion
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importation
cost and increase there foreign reserves which can be vital for a stable economy. In conclusion, countries must invest in producing
there
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their
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food needs internally, since it will not only help to have healthy citizens but
also
help to boost the economy of a
country
quickly.
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