In our life, purchasing 
 on the Internet is enjoying an upsurge in popularity in recent years. 
 situation has surely brought about both benefits and drawbacks, which are discussed in 
 essay. Within 
 paper, I intend to elaborate on the sources of 
 issue as well as suggest some viable solutions.
On the one hand, people have a tendency to buy 
 online in lieu of going to on-site 
. It is an undeniable fact that those who have hectic schedules choose shopping online in 
 to save time. 
, people can 
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  one click, which is more convenient for officers. From 
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  perspective of organizations, they push marketing which is highly competitive to other companies to make a large profit. 
 situation can create more jobs prospects for employees with a lucrative income. a proof of 
 would be that staffs working for Shopee earned 100 million VND a month.
, shopping online could 
 bring about various disadvantages. A clear drawback of 
 would be that buyers will not see the details of 
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  or their size. 
, they will purchase 
 that do not meet their expectation. Another negative aspect is that the majority of people does not have a sure 
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  whether to buy 
  or not. 
, consumers click to buy at that time 
 they change their mind about paying for that 
. A prime example of 
 would be that some teenagers ordered 20 cups of tea via 
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  when 
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  delivered to 
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  address, they refused to receive that 
. 
 issue causes a huge loss 
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  expenses of Now company.
In 
 to resolve 
 worrying trend, I am personally convinced that we must give out some viable solutions. Perhaps, one of the most effective methods would be that many 
 should have some campaigns to encourage customers to buy offline. 
, Starbucks Coffee have 
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  and encourage their customers to register. To be more specific, customers will have 
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  when purchasing bottles at on-site 
. 
, it can be conceded that local products are inexpensive as they do not have the expenses of transport and tax. If these 
 push their marketing about the benefits of buying local products, 
 problem will be dealt with effectively.
In conclusion, while it is apparent that there are many benefits of shopping online for both individuals and organizations, there are justifiable grounds for advocating the view that e-shopping brings about disadvantages. 
 is a complex issue 
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  can be hardly solved in short term; 
, if we consistently follow the above-mentioned measures, it is likely that 
 problem can be overcome.