Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that

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rising the number of

sports

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facilities can improve public

health

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.

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, others believe that other steps would be needed for better

health

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. I

also

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agree that

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, the

sports

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facilities,

healthy

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diet plays an important role

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in

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healthy

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life. Generally, physical activities have a vital role to maintain our life

healthy

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and disease-free.

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, individuals focus on several games like football, Cricket, run, etc.

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or any kinds of physical exercise keep

relax

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human’s

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the human’s

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mind and body as well.

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, a person who participates

regular

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in regular

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cricket match has less chance to face obesity

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the main causes of diabetics, heart problem and other issues. For

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this

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purposes, society

want

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to facilitate various playing areas for all ages, especially

young

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. I

also

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think the number of play-ground should be increased for the improvement of the physical conditions.

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, there is no doubt that diet

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help

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to balance the body’s fitness. Foods take a crucial function to improve public

health

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, taking

the

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fresh fruits and vegetables maintain

person’s

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a person’s

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blood pressure and blood sugar level.

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, people can improve their physiological conditions by avoiding some unhealthy foods which contain extra calories and cholesterols

such

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as

red-meat

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red meat

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, processed foods, etc.

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why sometimes the doctor

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advises

advices

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their patients to take low

cholesterol containing

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meals. So, I believe that healthy diets and

sports

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both have an unavoidable objective for maintaining a life healthy. In conclusion,

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, some people believe that

by

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increasing

a

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the

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number of play-ground is

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best way to develop public

health

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,

but

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without a healthy diet may not be possible to achieve

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good

health

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