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Mobile phones have made life easier: anyone can use a mobile phone to answer/make work calls or home calls at any place 7 days a week. Do you think this development has more positive effects or negative effects on the individual and society?

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last
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 several
decades
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 we have seen a considerable rise in the advancement of technology. Some people argue that
smart
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smartphones
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phones
 are responsible to make people’s
life
 easier in
positive
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way
 but some
other
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 do not find
this
 statement correct.
This
 issue is quite controversial, but I agree with the notion that development in cell
phones
 has positive effect outweigh the negative
affects
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effects
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.
Firstly
,
smart
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smartphones
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phones
 are making
the
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life
 easier than before. It
become
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 the identity of
individual
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the individual
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 that
carry
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 his privacy and business-related software.
For instance
, we could get in touch with all the family members, relatives and friends and by just clicking the buttons we get connected with everybody.
Furthermore
,
individual
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an individual
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 could access all the sate information and businesses related calls and messages with cellphones.
Secondly
, nowadays,
smart
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smartphones
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phones
are ease
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are eased
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 our world in many several ways too, apart from calling, it has enough technology to track down our health and call emergency services just in case if we lose our health suddenly.
For example
, a friend of mine admitted to the hospital
last
 week, as he got
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 attack while jogging and no one near to help him, so Siri called 911
right
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way
,
that is
way
, it acts like
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a life
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life saver
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lifesaver
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 sometimes. Apart from their positive effects, it has
adversely
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 negative effect on teenagers, as
such
, they are busy in their own world of
smart
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smartphones
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phones
 and social
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media
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medias
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media
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, resulting
, lack
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in, lack
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 of ethical and moral values in their
life
.
Moreover
, they are getting away from
the
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society,
main
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 goal and having some medical issues even in their young age of using cell
phones
 in
excessive
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way
. In conclusion, Cell
phones
 are making our
life
way
 better than previous in terms of technology advancement but bringing some sort of health issues and lack of fraternity among individual and children.
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