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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 learning a
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have in order to read, listen, speak, and write, as all of these
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 are playing a significant role in the learning process
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 each person has their own learning style.
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 new languages will be
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 if they are willing to
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develop
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 equally.
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 language learners have to understand that all four
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 are playing a significant role in their progress even though sometimes not that easy so as to keep up with each skill.
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 when
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 language they are
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using
 listening, speaking, reading, and writing in order to
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a native speakers
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a native speaker
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 one day
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 each individual has their
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strengths
 and
weakneses
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weaknesses
. Every student
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achieving
 the same target in a
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different
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 is based on their own experiences.
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 many
people
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 enjoy reading and writing while others like listening or speaking.The
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 likes reading and writing they are probably likes
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studying
 from books while
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those
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prefere
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prefer
 listening
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are more likely
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enjoying
 watching some tutorial video.
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 everyone likes in order to learn
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, they should
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practise
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 all four
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. In conclusion, each skill
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 very important so that students can
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develop
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 faster and
a
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efficient
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. I believe that these
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 are extremely important as
people
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using
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 in their
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 life.
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